2015年6月英語六級作文點(diǎn)評及范文
2015年6月英語六級考試作文真題第二篇：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way. ” You can give one example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
命題解析
本題要求評論美國作家Napoleon Hill的一句名言：“如果你不能做偉大的事情，那就以偉大的方式做小事。”并要求舉出一到兩個(gè)例子支持你的觀點(diǎn)。顯而易見，本題考查做小事的重要性。
本題其實(shí)來自于2013年6月的四級真題：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
在這道四級題目中，兒子問父親：“爸爸，我有點(diǎn)擔(dān)心核廢料的處理。”父親回答：“如果你能到了這兒的垃圾桶，你能做任何事情。”題目為做大事之前做小事的重要性，應(yīng)了一句古話：“一屋不掃，何以掃天下?”2015年6月的這道六級寫作真題其實(shí)與上述四級真題一脈相承，幾乎是原題重考。
寫作思路指導(dǎo)：
本題第一段應(yīng)該通過做大事和做小事的關(guān)系引出主題;
第二段可以進(jìn)行舉例論證，列舉自己身邊的'例子或社會熱點(diǎn)例子來支持自己的觀點(diǎn)，如雷鋒、焦裕祿等等;
第三段可以進(jìn)行歸納結(jié)論或提出建議措施：大部分人都沒有做大事的可能性，但細(xì)心做好每件小事就是成功。
新東方在線王江濤老師參考范文：
Success is something that many people strive for, but that not everyone among us attains. When we consider the various factors that play a role in determining whether a person is successful in life, ambition and action are wtwo of the first to come to mind. Just as American writer Napoleon Hill put it, “If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way. ”
Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice. A young person who aspires to be a great chef might decide to buy some cookbooks, spend weekends practicing and refining his culinary techniques, or take on a part-time job at a local restaurant. On the other hand, if he simply end up spending all has spare time surfing the Internet or playing video games, neither of which would give him the skills or experience needed to succeed.
In conclusion, doing great things and doing small things are both essential in determining whether we flourish or fall behind. The former gives us the drive and direction to move forward, while the latter enables us to implement our vision and “make things happen”. In combination, they represent the winning formula that will put us firmly on the road to success.
參考譯文
成功是許多人所追求的目標(biāo)，但這個(gè)目標(biāo)非每個(gè)人都能實(shí)現(xiàn)。在考慮到?jīng)Q定一個(gè)人是否成功的因素時(shí)，我們最先想到的兩個(gè)因素世雄心與行動。正如美國作家拿破侖 希爾所說：“如果你不能做偉大的事情，那就以偉大的方式做小事。”
可以給出無數(shù)的例子，但這個(gè)就足夠了。一個(gè)渴望成為偉大廚師的人，或許會決定買一些烹飪書籍，或是把整個(gè)周末的時(shí)間用于改造自己的烹調(diào)技巧，亦或是在當(dāng)?shù)氐囊患也宛^里從事一份兼職工作。相反，如果他只是將所有的閑暇時(shí)間用于上網(wǎng)或玩電子游戲，這些都不能為他帶來成功所需的技巧或經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
總之，做大事和做小事都是決定我們成功與否的重要因素。前者給與我們前進(jìn)的動力和方向，后者使我們能夠積極主動地實(shí)現(xiàn)愿望。而把兩種因素結(jié)合起來，才是我們走上成功之路的秘訣。
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