考研英語作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解析
作文是考研英語中很重要的一部分，得高分自然是所有考生夢寐以求的，但是怎樣的作文才能得到閱卷老師的青睞，是有一定標(biāo)準(zhǔn)可循的，下面我們就把這些標(biāo)準(zhǔn)總結(jié)一下，希望大家在以后的復(fù)習(xí)中，能夠有側(cè)重地練習(xí)。
分數(shù)檔
評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
第五檔
A節(jié)（9~10分）
B節(jié)（17~20分）
很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
包含了所有內(nèi)容要點；
使用豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；
語言自然流暢，語法錯誤極少；
有效地采用了多種銜接手法，文字連貫，層次清晰；
格式與語域恰當(dāng)貼切。
對目標(biāo)讀者完全產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果。
第四檔
A節(jié)（7~8分）
B節(jié)（13~16分）
較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
包含所有內(nèi)容要點，允許漏掉一、兩個次重點；
使用較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；
語言基本準(zhǔn)確，只有在試圖使用較復(fù)雜或較高級詞匯時才有個別錯誤；
格式與語域較恰當(dāng)。
對目標(biāo)讀者產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果。
第三檔
A節(jié)（5~6分）
B節(jié)（9~12分）
基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
雖漏掉了一些內(nèi)容，但包含多數(shù)內(nèi)容要點；
應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的需求；
有一些語法及詞匯錯誤，但不影響理解；
采用了簡單的銜接手法，內(nèi)容較連貫，層次較清晰；
格式和語域基本合理。
對目標(biāo)讀者基本產(chǎn)生了預(yù)期的效果。
第二檔
A節(jié)（3~4分）
B節(jié)（5~8分）
未能按要求完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
漏掉或未能有效闡述一些內(nèi)容要點，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容；
語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項目有限；
有較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解；
未采用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址�，�?nèi)容缺少連貫性；
格式和語域不恰當(dāng)。
未能清楚地傳達信息給讀者。
第一檔
A節(jié)（1~2分）
B節(jié)（1~4分）
未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。
明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，且有許多不想關(guān)的內(nèi)容；
語法項目和詞匯的使用單調(diào)、重復(fù)；
語言錯誤多，有礙讀者對內(nèi)容的理解，語言運用能力差；
未使用任何銜接手法，內(nèi)容不連貫，缺少組織、分段；
無格式與語域概念。
未能傳達信息給讀者。
零檔（0分）
所傳達的信息或所用語言太少，無法評價；內(nèi)容與要求無關(guān)或無法辨認。
以上就是考研英語作文全部的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，希望大家可以對照查漏補缺，祝大家的作文水平每天都有新的提高。
2016考研英語作文預(yù)測
2016考研英語大綱已于9月18日出爐，跟2015年考研英語大綱相比，沒有什么大的變化�，F(xiàn)在老師就為考生預(yù)測一下2016考研大綱的作文。
一、小作文
1. 小作文必備書信之申請信
1)Directions:
Imagine you are a student who wants to apply for the New Star scholarship offered by your university. Write a letter to the person concerned which should include
(1) the purpose of writing the letter;
(2) your qualifications for the scholarship;
(3) your thanks.
You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.
You do not need to write the address.
2)經(jīng)典范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you in order to apply for the New Star Scholarship.
As you can see from the attached grade sheet, I am one of the top students in my department. I have also represented the university at the 8th English Speaking Contest, where I was placed first. It is because I have attained such high standards that the Dean, Prof. Wang, suggested I apply for the scholarship. I believe that I do not only do well in my study, also contribute to campus life and our university in my extracurricular activities, particularly as departmental head of the Student Union.
Thank you in advance for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3)推薦原因：
首先，申請信是考研英語大綱規(guī)定的必考類型；
其次，縱觀考研英語小作文的命題規(guī)律，對于書信的考查無非都是對12種常見書信類型的反復(fù)對考查；
再次，2006年(英語一)考查了“申請資助貧困兒童”這一話題，因此相關(guān)的申請信請同學(xué)們務(wù)必關(guān)注、背誦以及仿寫。
2. 小作文必備書信之詢問信
1)Directions:
You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books. Write a letter to the sales department of a bookstore to ask for:
(1) detailed information about the books you want,
(2) methods of payment,
(3) time and way of delivery
2)經(jīng)典范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
As a student to take CET-6 in this coming December, I am writing to ask if there are some high quality test preparation materials.
I wonder if you have the following books: a vocabulary book covering the 5,500 words for the CET-6 test as well as past test papers with keys and model essays and a Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English, which I can turn for help. Besides, how should I pay for these books? By cash or by other means? Finally, if I order these books now, when can I get them and how will these books be sent to my house?
I would be grateful if you could give me an early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
3)推薦原因：
首先，詢問信是考研英語大綱規(guī)定的必考類型；
其次，縱觀考研英語小作文的命題規(guī)律，對于書信的考查無非都是對12種常見書信類型的反復(fù)對考查；
再次，2014年(英語二)考查了“向未來室友詢求生活建議”這一話題，因此相關(guān)的詢問信請同學(xué)們務(wù)必關(guān)注、背誦以及仿寫。
二、大作文
1. 英語一
預(yù)測一
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should:
1) describe the drawings briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
This picture is humorous but reveals a profound meaning. According to this figure, we can see that two individuals are digging wells for water with spades. However, one person gives up looking for water because he digs even three holes but still cannot find any water, while the other one insists on digging one hole and finally receives an abundance of water.
This picture tells us one principle which is a famous proverb called “Success belongs to the persevering”. It is obvious that the chance of finding water is fair enough to the two men. Nevertheless, the reason leading to the completely different consequences is only their different attitudes. As students, we should not doubt that the God will favor one special group and feel upset and hopeless. To be frank, our society is realistic and it provides everyone with same opportunities. We need to seize the opportunities, correct our attitudes and be down-to-earth persons. I firmly believe that we can achieve our goals by persevering painstaking efforts. Nothing is impossible as long as we do our best. In addition, sometimes insisting itself is not absolutely unquestioned. If we choose an unpractical goal, it is just a behavior of wasting life. On the contrary, it is wise to set an objective cautiously and then keep going without any complaints.
To sum up, selecting a right target and always working for it is of great significance for all of us.
推薦理由：
1. 今年考永恒性話題可能性大過大事件
2. 永恒性話題應(yīng)該會偏向相對積極的概念。
3. 根據(jù)政治環(huán)境因素，很可能不會涉及針砭時弊的任何話題，所以話題還是以個人素養(yǎng)、理想為導(dǎo)向。
2016考研英語小作文：技巧為先，文采其次
根據(jù)《考研英語大綱》規(guī)定，從2005年取消了聽力之后，考研英語作文就有兩類了，一個大作文，另一個是新增的小作文（10分）。英語一的大作文為圖畫作文（20分），英語二的為圖表作文（15分）。其中的小作文，多是辭職信、道歉信、感謝信等應(yīng)用文體，它的形式是給出提示要點，要求考生根據(jù)要求表達清楚要點。它的評分重點在于信息點的覆蓋；內(nèi)容的組織，語言的準(zhǔn)確性；格式及語域的恰當(dāng)。鑒于小作文不需要華麗的詞藻和吸引閱卷人眼球的文采，只要掌握一定的方法技巧，在格式、語言和要點等方面下足功夫，拿到理想的.分數(shù)還是不難的。那么一起來看看小作文寫作技巧吧。
一、格式
1. 稱呼：英語應(yīng)用文稱呼有這樣的特點：
1）如果是不認識的人，一般稱呼為敬詞+尊稱。例如，Dear Sir or Madam 或者 To Whom It May Concern (需注意每個單詞首字母都大寫)。
2）如果是寫給關(guān)系正式的某團體或個人，稱呼為敬詞+尊稱+名。例如，Dear Mr. Xx,或Dear Ms.xx,；
3）對于關(guān)系較親密的人可以直呼其名，即 Dear xx,。
同時需要注意的是：1.稱呼要頂格寫；2. 稱呼之后要加逗號或者冒號。這里推薦大家用逗號，因為歷年的高分范文都是用逗號的。
2. 正文：正文格式一般有兩種格式：一是縮進式，即首段開頭空四個字母，段落之間不空行; 另一種是齊頭式，即每段開頭不空格，但是各段之間空一行�？缈冀逃し椒嚼蠋熃ㄗh考生采用縮進式，因為如果用齊頭式，段間空行的話很可能答題空間不夠，導(dǎo)致字數(shù)不夠。
3. 結(jié)語：結(jié)語要注意要留出兩行。一行是靠后寫類似漢語“此致敬禮”的話也就是“Sincerely yours， ”或者“Yours sincerely ，”一定要注意這個地方的結(jié)尾是有逗號的，如果丟掉了逗號，則會扣掉一份，請大家一定要注意。同時，還需要注意落款，落款部分不能寫自己的名字。按照directions 中的要求使用名字。英語一一般是Liming結(jié)尾，英語二為Zhangwei。同時請大家注意名字后面一定不要加任何的符號。很多的學(xué)生喜歡在此打點號，請大家一定要注意，這里會被扣掉一分。
二、語言
寫作用詞準(zhǔn)確是最基礎(chǔ)的要求之一。其次，句型可以多變，例如既有并列句，也有復(fù)合句，還有從句，但注意語法運用要正確。此外還要注意，正式語言一般是寫給具有正式關(guān)系的團體或機構(gòu)，這種情況不用縮略語和口語用法。英語二的小作文一般寫給正式關(guān)系的機構(gòu)的文章片偏多。除了正式的文體以外，其他的文體皆為非正式文體，像寫給朋友的書信等。英語一的小作文就是較為非正式一些。
一般小作文的考查要求中會體現(xiàn)出寫該篇的目的和場合，所以考生在寫作時要注意針對不同場合使用不同語言，使交流得以進行。另外，考生也要注意不同的應(yīng)用文有不同的用語。建議考生對某些應(yīng)用文的格式和習(xí)慣用語，應(yīng)該加以熟悉和背誦，以便運用自如。
三、其他
考生在考試時注意在看到題目要求后不要忙于動筆，雖說小作文的字數(shù)充其量在一百多個單詞，但是依舊要在腦子里理清思路。最好能夠在仔細審題以后，認真列個提綱，這樣更有利于思路清晰。
寫作時，注意表達清楚以下幾個方面：
首先交代清楚寫信目的；其次為了讓閱卷者對你的文章結(jié)構(gòu)及表意一目了然，注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞或銜接詞的運用；接下來，應(yīng)該對個人的觀點進行闡述。最后，行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句。在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達清楚的要點和細節(jié)。
以上就是關(guān)于英語小作文的一些復(fù)習(xí)方法和寫作技巧，希望能對2016年的考生有所幫助，祝大家復(fù)習(xí)順利！
2015考研臨考英語一作文終極預(yù)測
第一部分：作文預(yù)測
大作文話題類型：1. 社會現(xiàn)象類； 2. 抽象品質(zhì)及社會問題類
預(yù)測話題包括：1. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)類（網(wǎng)購、微博、微信等新現(xiàn)象）；2. 抽象品質(zhì)類（夢想與行動、創(chuàng)新、 堅持等）3. 環(huán)境類（交通狀況、動物/資源保護、節(jié)約型社會等）
應(yīng)用文考察類型：書信
預(yù)測書信種類：投訴信、咨詢信、請求信、祝賀信、申請信、感謝信
第二部分：部分預(yù)測作文范文（提醒大家，劃線部分為建議背誦句型，括號內(nèi)容為可以替換內(nèi)容）
大作文預(yù)測話題一：網(wǎng)絡(luò)類（網(wǎng)購、微博、微信等新現(xiàn)象）
What is subtly demonstrated in the above drawing is that in front of a desktop sits a fashionable lady who is staring at the screen with shocked expression wearing on cheeks and huge sweat dropping from her forehead. What is spit from the computer is the lengthy Alipay bill, which can almost be spread as long as two meters. The caption above reads that you should keep away from Taobao and cherish your income.
The objective of the drawer is to show us that utmost attention should be paid to shopping online, which has exerted profound impact on the daily life of the average individuals. We can easily recognize its advantages as follows: e-commerce, which is extremely convenient, can save us a great amount of precious time and we can buy products everywhere we want as long as we can surf online. However, for all the advantages mentioned above, online trading is by no means without its limitations as listed below: we may be cheated by some online retailers, which might be a potential threat to our bank accounts.
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. For one thing, we should appeal to the authorities to make strict legislations to severely punish those who deliberately spoil the interests of online customers. For another, we should enhance the awareness of residents that rational purchasing is conducive to our income management. Only in this way can we maximize the merits and minimize the demerits of online purchasing.
大作文預(yù)測話題二：抽象品質(zhì)類（夢想與行動、創(chuàng)新、 堅持等）
Wise people used to say that taking actions is of utmost significance in our daily life. This is most vividly illustrated in the given picture, which shows that two young boys both holding guitar are playing different life situations. The boy on the left is daydreaming about the day he gives a perfect concert and is admired by all the fans, while the boy on the right is practicing the guitar and singing skill persistently.
Studying it further, it is easy to figure out that taking actions is the only way to fulfill our dream. Our country, for example, has developed rapidly in terms of economy and science and technology. We have accomplished in about two decades what other emerging countries used to achieve in a century. There is no denying that it is the perseverance and taking actions that really realize the promise they made. If you never take action to do something, you will never have a chance to win. For example, a great number of students choose to take part in the National Entrance Exam for master’s degree. However, those who dreamed of becoming the postgraduates without taking any actions are even tremble at the thought of taking the exam, most of them are escaping the classroom when the first exam is over.
In a word, I believe, just like Forrest Gump said: “Life is like a box of chocolates：you never know what you’re gonna get. ” Unless you have the awareness that action speaks louder than the word.
大作文預(yù)測話題三：環(huán)境類（交通狀況、動物/資源保護、節(jié)約型社會等）
�。–ommon as it is, it has deep implication）. As is vividly shown in the cartoon, at least five patients are staying in one hospital who are injured because of jay-walking, driving after drinking and disregarding of the laws. If we take a closer watch, it is of little difficulty to find that one police is patiently explicating the traffic laws to one injured person, standing at a wheel chair which is pushed by one nurse.
There is no doubt that it describes a common phenomenon in our society that traffic problems are more and more severe and what might trigger this affair? （For my part, the following two are of utmost importance.） For one part, the general public have failed to realize the importance of abiding by the traffic regulations and laws（and a big deal of the attention have been distracted by the so-called“great affair”）. Once some drivers easily disregard the traffic signals, so do other drivers who intend to obey the laws. Moreover, the current state of affairs depicted in the drawing, may have been encouraged, though not justified, by the lack of severe legal penalty. If someone does disorderly parking or drives under the influence of alcohol, the punishment is not so harsh that the drivers could afford to learn a heavy lesson from the fine as to never do it again . (If we let this situation continue as it is, ultimately, our society will suffer a great destruction.)
It is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this current evil trend. On one hand, we should cultivate the awareness of people that everyone needs to reflect on his or her uncivilized conducts and strengthen his self-discipline. On the other hand, it is high time that more severe and sound laws and regulations should be introduced to harness and curb this matter. Only in this way, can we crack the hard nut and embrace a bright future.
范文一：
A thought-provoking dialogue between the mother elephant and her own child appears in the first picture. Having growing his teeth, the young elephant is eager to share the exciting news with his mother. However, after repeating his words several times, there is still no response coming from the mother. Meanwhile, the attractive caption in the second photo reads: no trade, no kill.
The above pictures unveil a hazard posed to wildlife due to the expanding scale of world commercial hunting. At least two fundamental factors could contribute to this phenomenon. The industry of commercial hunting have undergone a booming expansion (along with the growing public awareness of the merits of wildlife, which makes/), making hunting unusually profitable. Worse still, lacking knowledge regarding the significance of ecological balance, some people take the gun to chase animals insatiably (and thus cause a severe threat to all life in the world). Apparently, this trend will surely in turn endanger humankind in the long run.
(On no account should we turn a blind eye to such things.//All these factors above make it crucial to take drastic measures to protect the wildlife.) Accordingly, governments all over the world are supposed to unite to work out effective measures against commercial hunting. Additionally, people should be educated from childhood to cultivate the awareness that we and the rare wild animals share the same precious planet. I do believe a harmonious relationship between the wildlife and human beings is awaiting us if we make every effort to promote wildlife protection both nationally and internationally.
范文二：
The drawing does mirror a common social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking. According to the above photo, a couple of elephants are walking forward slowly while the young elephant says to his mother, “Mom, my tusks start to grow up!
But mom, why aren’t you happy about that?”What is conveyed carries the message of the human’s threat on the wild animals by catching and killing.
A host of reasons may make this happen. To start with, an army of hunters have been killing rare wild animals just to make huge profits. That is the very reason why the mother elephant does not glad to hear that her son’s ivory growing. Another significant cause of the rapid reduction of wildlife is the disappearance of their natural habitats. Because the urbanization is advancing fast, forcing the animals give up their original places and change another site which may not be as good as before.
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic and effective measures to protect the wildlife. On the one hand, we can appeal to the government to make some strict laws to prevent them from being caught and killed. On another level, we must enhance citizen's awareness that loving the nature is everybody's responsibility. Only through these measures are we able to have opportunities to expect a beautiful world and a promising prospect to come.
書信作文預(yù)測：投訴信、咨詢信、請求信、祝賀信、申請信、感謝信
投訴信
Direction: You just bought an English dictionary from a famous e-commerce site only to find it not as good as you expected. Write an email to the customer service center to
1) complain the poor quality of the dictionary, and
2) give reasons for your complaints.
Dear Mr. Wang,
As a regular customer, I am writing this letter to complain about the quality of dictionary bought from the bookone.com.
I ordered an Oxford Dictionary of Contemporary English a week ago. Apart from the delayed delivery, many pages in the dictionary are missing and some of the pages are reversed, which are totally unacceptable to me.
I would like to get a refund or at least change it for a new one. And trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
詢問信
Write a letter inquiring about a travel agency about the trip to Mount Huangshan. Some necessary details must be included. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to travel to Mount Huangshan this summer. I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding the following information concerned in your agency because my friend John spoke highly of your service.
My family will come with me. Therefore, I would like to know the details about this trip, such as the accommodation, the plans and the money we will cost. By the way, how do you deliver these materials to me? What’s the deadline before we make the final decision?
How do I pay for you?
Thank you for your attention. I am looking forward to your immediate response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
請求信
Directions: You find your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher:
1） you need to withdraw from two courses,
2） explain the reasons,
3） ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.
Dear Professor Smith,
I am writing to formally request to withdraw from two courses: Introduction to Elementary Education and Teaching Methods.
The main reason for reducing my course load is that I am finding it extremely difficult to manage six courses. Because I really have to work part time, I have no other choice but to decrease my course load. Besides, I would also like to request a tuition refund. I am sorry for any inconveniences I have caused by this change in plans. This decision was not taken lightly, and I do appreciate the kind consideration you have shown to me.
Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at 82036600. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
祝賀信：
Directions：Your friend Smith told you he had started his own business .Write a letter to him to congratulate him and give him some helpful suggestions.
Dear Smith,(大家注意此處是逗號)
I was happy to learn that you had opened your own firm and I would like to express my warmest congratulations.
The final realization of your long-cherished dream should be attributed to your diligence, persistence and ambition. I am glad that your consistent pursuit of dream is rewarded now. As a good friend of you, I advise you to keep your ambition. Moreover, in response to challenges, please never to overestimate the difficulties and underestimate your ability.
Please accept my congratulations again. And I do believe you and your firm will achieve one success after another.
Sincerely yours,（逗號）
Li Ming（無符號，千萬不要打點）
感謝信
Directions:
You have just returned from a visit to a university in Great Britain. And you were warmly treated there by Professor Smith. Please write a letter to express your thanks to him for his hospitality.
Dear Prof. Smith,
I would like to thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my recent visit to your university.
It was nice of you to introduce me so many of famous professors and celebrated scholars at your university. I feel obliged to you for the selfless assistance you render me. I appreciate it more than I can say.
Finally, I wish I can have an opportunity to repay your kindness when you come to China in the near future. Again with many thanks.
Sincerely yours,（逗號）
Li Ming（無符號，千萬不要打點）
申請信：
Directions:
You want to apply for the following job: a personal secretary to the general manager, write a letter to Mr. Byron to:
1) show your interest,
2) describe yourself, and
3) explain why you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr. Byron,
I am writing to apply for（求職） the position as the personal secretary to the general manager./（求學(xué)）(the opportunity for further study in your university).
I am fully confident that I am the right candidate. To begin with, I major in secretary and will graduate from Peking University. I have a good academic performance in school and have been the top five students for four years in my grade. In addition, I am an open-minded, cooperative and ready-to-help girl.
Enclosed is my resume to provide additional information. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming
2015考研英語作文預(yù)測之環(huán)保
APEC結(jié)束不久，你對她的印象都有什么？是六天的假期，還是寬敞的街道？是地鐵出行更加不便，還是很多旅游景點的封閉，抑或是隨著APEC而來的越來越多的利好政策？不過你應(yīng)該會聽到過一個詞——APEC藍，如果你身在北京，那你更有可能切實地感受到它。其實，APCE blue雖然稍縱即逝，但是人們對美好環(huán)境的追求確實一直在進行中，考研英語作文一直都是貼合當(dāng)今熱點話題的，那么環(huán)保自然就成為了考研英語作文的熱點之一，下面給大家?guī)硪恍┡c環(huán)保有關(guān)的單詞和句子，開背吧！
一、閃光詞匯
wastebin 垃圾桶
plastic 塑料制品
environment pollution 環(huán)境污染
environmental conservation 環(huán)境保護
environmental legislation 環(huán)境立法
environmental reform 環(huán)境改造
recycl循環(huán)
energy saving節(jié)能
green house綠色環(huán)境
not polluted無污染
advanced technology新科技
二、閃光例句
In major cities, residents are expected to get around by foot, bicycle or use public transportation.
在大城市，居民應(yīng)該盡量步行，或用自行車或公共交通工具出行。
We should continue initiating some constructive initiatives, such as Car Free Day and its like, in promoting green transportation and bringing about cleaner air.
在促進綠色交通和帶來更多的干凈空氣方面，我們應(yīng)該繼續(xù)采�。╥nitiate）一些建設(shè)性的措施（initiatives),比如無車日活動等等。
三、閃光參考范文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “l(fā)ow carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4. 71 kilogram each month。
To serve as responsible stewards of the planet, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。
【寫作點撥】
圖片中一個小男孩，早已進入甜蜜的夢鄉(xiāng)，電視卻依然在播放，這時候媽媽走過來幫他關(guān)了電視，還責(zé)備他為什么總是忘記關(guān)電視。顯然，直觀看來，這幅圖是在告訴我們要節(jié)約用電。但是，我們?nèi)绻麖母暧^，更深層次的角度去思考，這幅圖正是在告訴我們一個流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡導(dǎo)一種低碳的生活方式，倡導(dǎo)環(huán)保的生活理念。因此本文的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)可如下：
第一段：描述圖畫。作文一開始，要把圖畫中的內(nèi)容大概描述清楚，快速準(zhǔn)確地領(lǐng)會圖畫所要傳達的內(nèi)容；
第二段：列舉現(xiàn)象，分析影響。接著，分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，會帶來什么樣的危害；
第三段：建議措施，展望未來。最后，提出解決問題的方法，例如低碳生活要采取什么樣的措施，我們作為普通人應(yīng)該如何從一點一滴做起等。
通過今天的學(xué)習(xí)，相信大家對環(huán)保這一話題有了一定了解，其實不管是改革發(fā)展帶來的陣痛還是復(fù)習(xí)考研這一段的迷茫，記住里爾克的一句話：Where there is what victory, stand mean everything！哪里有什么勝利可言，挺住意味著一切 ！
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