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2015年6月英語六級作文預(yù)測（第一篇）
預(yù)測一：
題目：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then give your comments. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【審題構(gòu)思】
這是一篇圖畫類作文，要求考生描述圖畫，并做出評論。此類作文一般為三段式。即第一段簡單描述圖畫的內(nèi)容及內(nèi)涵，第二段就圖畫的內(nèi)容展開評論，并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，第三段重申自己的看法并提出建議。考生在評論和表明自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，一定要思路清晰，且要表達(dá)清楚。
【參考范文】
In the picture above, a child flies from one cage to the other cage like a bird.One cage is named school, and the other is named cram school. What a sarcastic picture. There is no freedom left for the children who cannot enjoy the supposed cheerful vacation.
Why cannot the children enjoy the vacation that belongs to them? Who push the children from one cage to the other? What should we do to help the trapped children? The three questions solved, the above picture will not exist any more. The answer to the first question is hidden with the superficial one being acquiring more knowledge, and the fundamental one is that parents demand more scores from their children. They expect their children to be able to score more through attending various cram schools at the cost of their children’s supposedly splendid vocation. So it is the parents who pursue quick success that push the children from one cage to the other. To free the children, the parents should put emphasis on the children’s physical and mental health rather than the score.
As is known to all that pursuit of high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be uprooted. Therefore, we should emancipate the children in the mind and return the joy of childhood to children gradually.
【高分詞匯與詞組】
supposed 本該的
trapped 受困的
attend various cram schools 參加各種輔導(dǎo)班
pursue quick success 急功近利
【句型替換】
To free the children, the parents should put emphasis on the children’s physical and mental health rather than the score.
=To set the children free , the parents should emphasize the children’s physical and mental well-being rather than the score.
As is known to all that pursuit of high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be uprooted.
=As we all know that pursuing high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be eradicated.
預(yù)測二：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then give your comments. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【參考范文】
In the picture above, two men shake hands with both saying “it’s my fault”. We can infer that their cooperation will be continued and connections be closer after they acknowledge their mistakes actively. The inference is grounded in the following two points.
Firstly, acknowledging our mistakes actively represents a kind of attitude which indicates that we have realized the mistakes and we will be responsible for it. Such an attitude can, to some extent, mitigate the consequences our mistakes have incurred. Secondly, when we say “sorry, it’s my fault” to our partners or to the person involved with our mistakes, they will forget the harm or loss our mistakes bring them and will continue cooperation and connection with us because they regard that we can shoulder the responsibility. Otherwise, we will leave a bad impression on them.
All in all, it is not embarrassed to acknowledge our mistakes. Instead, acknowledging our mistakes actively reflects our responsible attitude and can leave a good impressions on others.
【高分表達(dá)】
We can infer that their cooperation will be continued and connections be closer... 我們可以推斷他們會(huì)繼續(xù)合作，聯(lián)系會(huì)更緊密……
The inference is grounded in the following two points. 推斷基于以下兩點(diǎn)。
mitigate 減輕，緩解
continue cooperation and connection with us 繼續(xù)同我們的合作和與聯(lián)系
all in all 總之
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